Autumn leaves

I was learning  to use  describing words.
I enjoyed  in the leaves  I found it hard to write it
 Have you had fun in he autumn leaves?
 
 My friends  and I were raking leaves in this cool afternoon. Until my friends jumped into the big  crunchy  pile of leaves. until  my friend did not come out  so I had to  follow them. it  had a Tunnel  that led to a  land   of Autumn.   I was amazed  I said  i need to find my friends. Oh there are over there i went there hey guys  I said. Yeah?. Anyways my friends said what is this place. I say  Autumn  world. maybe says my other friend  said  we better look around  look at this look around more  the  end! 

By: Manraj

How to make a good blog post

I have been learning to use a google draw  about how to make a great blog posts    with Mrs Cameron  to post online 
DLO [ digital,Learning,object]. My learning   went great but the hard the    part was the background the fun part was the writing .
 Have you  ever done this, do you want to do this,  do you not want to do this?  Cybersmart                                                                                                                 

me and my mum

dog facts.