I enjoyed in the leaves I found it hard to write it
Have you had fun in he autumn leaves?
My friends and I were raking leaves in this cool afternoon. Until my friends jumped into the big crunchy pile of leaves. until my friend did not come out so I had to follow them. it had a Tunnel that led to a land of Autumn. I was amazed I said i need to find my friends. Oh there are over there i went there hey guys I said. Yeah?. Anyways my friends said what is this place. I say Autumn world. maybe says my other friend said we better look around look at this look around more the end!
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