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Tuesday, 7 September 2021

Black Widow

       Black Widows Precious Gem


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It All Started When Black Widow Was Eating Food She Left Her Black Gem Unattended When She Finishes Her  Her Food She Leaves  The Property To Save Someone's Life when she left  Joker Creeped Into Her House While She Was Gone And Slipped Into Her room And Found The Gem He Placed it In His Bag And Jumped Out The Window

He Ran Away From The Scene of the crime Black Widow Arrives Home She Bolted Into Her Room Thinking “oh No My Gem I Left It Out” Once she reached her room She Looks Around And Can’t Find It She Looked At Her Window And Says “ I’m Pretty Sure I did Close It” She Only Had One Thought In Her Mind “Joker” She Leaves Her House Of In A Hurry To Find Joker.

                            A Hour And A Half Later…..


She Comes Face To Face With The Person Who stole Her Gem They Start Fighting Then  The Joker Lets The Gem Go And It Rolls Down The Hill So Then Blac Widow Runs Behind It  She Reaches It And Gets home.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Manraj
    What a cool narrative you have written. I really like how you used speech marks around the characters talking. Have a go at adding in some fullstops where you think your sentences end.
    Great effort!
    Miss Hudson 

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