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Friday, 5 November 2021

Writing

 So There I Was Hanging…. Onto The Edge Of The Cliff. I Looked Down All I Could See Was The Plain Blue Ocean My Hands Were Slipping Now You're Wondering What I Was Doing Here. I Was Collecting Berries For The Baker Down Road He Pays Me For All The Berrys I Collect. I Do This For Money To Support The Family. I Was Walking Near The Edge And My Foot Slipped. My Basket Was Okay I Think?I Looked Down My Hand Wear Starting To Slip Even More . I Regripped My Hands I Thought I Can't Stay Like This For Longer I Had To Pull Myself Up I Started To Pull Myself Up I Had Managed To Pull Myself Up I Laid on My Back My Legs Hanging Off The Cliff I Sat Up And Stood Up I Started Walking But I. Started Walking The Wrong Way Because Of How Sarcd I Was Later On I Said T-This Is Not The Way Home It Was Already Evening My Parents Were Probably Worried I Would Have Been Home Hours Ago. I Was Hungry And Cold I Didn't Even Bring A Jacket I Looked Around For Anything In The Forest. I Walked Too A Tree It Was Getting Even Colder Well I was Used To Cold But Not This Cold. I Found A Big Leaf I Could Cover Myself With For The Night There Were Venomous Snakes And Who Knows Even Bugs!?. All I Know Was I Wasn't Gonna Wake Up Alive.

             Next Day…..

I Thought I Was Dreaming But I Was Not Huh My Arm Was Itchy I Looked Down At It Covered In Mosquito Bites. Come On I Whined I Started Walking 

             1 Hour Later

I Could Believe I Was Face To Face With The Grey Wolf.  I Stood Tall And Maintained Eye Contact. I Started To Walk Back It Followed For A Minute. Then Ran Away I Sighed And Walked Away Thinking What If He Brings Back His Pack To ATTACK ME1?. 

         To Be continued………..


1 comment:

  1. Wow what a great starter to your story it really hooked me in!
    Miss Hudson

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